This is my first serious attempt at non bullshittery poetry in a number of months. Feedback would be appreciated. :)

Green Planet

Beyond the gaze of human eyes

The Green Planet in the heavens lie.

No coal is burnt, and no atoms are split

The inhabitants cherish nature, not exploit it.

Oh how beautiful is the Green Planet

With mountains of emerald granite

And the most dazzling chartreusian seas

Green leaves fly in the cooling breeze.

‘Twas nature not divine creation that created such a place.

Formed by the Canabi star

The Green Planet floats in space

No religion was written and no laws were passed.

Nations live together needing no system of caste.

Were we like the Green Planet no woe would be felt

On the path we are taking our green planet will melt

To be like the Green Planet it is never too late

But we must act now or we seal our fate